Short, sweet and fun demo! I adore the character art and poses, and would have loved to play the full game (Coriander is probably my fave <3). Will keep an eye on your projects for sure.
If there's one thing I'd change about the demo, it'd be to improve the contrast of the first few intro screens where the white-ish background blends in with the text in the foreground too much for my bad eyes to be read comfortably, even with the text outline. The rest of it was perfectly readable for me though (and I realise I'm critiquing a demo from 5 years ago).
this was so FUNNY to play through, and the art (esp the sprites) is so charming. i was rlly happy to see the uh. Scenes. with coriander and baker - trans rights! - nice to see ur ppl being presented as something beautiful and desirable. and the premise of the story is JUST the sort of vaguely religious mech premise that just GETS me. im excited to see the rest !!! good luck uwu
ALSO THE STORYTELLING ! besides its charming humor it ALSO is rlly good at involving the player. its written with the expectation that we already know whats going on (which makes it feel natural) while also pacing itself so we DONT actually know whats going on (which helps you keep up suspense and surprises). i rlly rlly liked it dude!!!!!!!!!
I'm going to cry these are such nice compliments!! I'm SO happy you had a good experience with it and I can't wait to show you more! Thank you again these comments seriously made my day
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Short, sweet and fun demo! I adore the character art and poses, and would have loved to play the full game (Coriander is probably my fave <3). Will keep an eye on your projects for sure.
If there's one thing I'd change about the demo, it'd be to improve the contrast of the first few intro screens where the white-ish background blends in with the text in the foreground too much for my bad eyes to be read comfortably, even with the text outline. The rest of it was perfectly readable for me though (and I realise I'm critiquing a demo from 5 years ago).
Tragic to her AA/SB is being indefinitely shelved - is there any unreleased art or an album of the in-game art to buy in a pack?
this was so FUNNY to play through, and the art (esp the sprites) is so charming. i was rlly happy to see the uh. Scenes. with coriander and baker - trans rights! - nice to see ur ppl being presented as something beautiful and desirable. and the premise of the story is JUST the sort of vaguely religious mech premise that just GETS me. im excited to see the rest !!! good luck uwu
ALSO THE STORYTELLING ! besides its charming humor it ALSO is rlly good at involving the player. its written with the expectation that we already know whats going on (which makes it feel natural) while also pacing itself so we DONT actually know whats going on (which helps you keep up suspense and surprises). i rlly rlly liked it dude!!!!!!!!!
I'm going to cry these are such nice compliments!! I'm SO happy you had a good experience with it and I can't wait to show you more! Thank you again these comments seriously made my day
It's great so far! Love the artwork and story.
Thank you so much!!! I'm happy you enjoyed it!